PEP小学英语六年级上册作文范例及点评4

概要：How to get to the science museumWe are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is an old thing show in the Museum. Do you know how we can get to the science museum?The science museum is next to the People’s Park. It’s isn’t far from our school. So we can go there on foot .Walk straight to the west from our school， next turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes， then turn right at traffic lights. You can find the People’s Park on the right . W

How to get to the science museum

　　We are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is an old thing show in the Museum. Do you know how we can get to the science museum?

　　The science museum is next to the People’s Park. It’s isn’t far from our school. So we can go there on foot .Walk straight to the west from our school， next turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes， then turn right at traffic lights. You can find the People’s Park on the right . Walk straight， and you’ll see the science museum.

　　【要领点评】

　　这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”。怎样才算是一篇好作文呢?通过你的叙述，能让别人很容易找到博物馆，这应是最基本的要求。小作者在文中告诉我们什么呢?首先他写了去博物馆的位置，最后浓墨重彩，指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线，这条路线够清晰吧!

　　小朋友们在写这类作文的时候，总有些无从下手的感觉，不知从何说起。其实介绍路线，无非就是告诉他人某段路的起点和终点，还有就是如何从起点走到终点。要给他人说清楚，你自己首先得清楚，然后再通过自己的叙述，将路线清清楚楚得呈现出来。一定要注意行文中一些关键的地方，如在哪儿转弯，向哪儿转，经过哪些重要的交通标志或显眼的标志建筑等。这样，你就能说清，别人也能弄明白。