PEP小学英语六年级下册作文范例及点评6

概要：A Farewell PartyIt’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after p

A Farewell Party

　　It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.

　　Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.

　　Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.

　　【要领点评】

　　写法：这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大家都表演了什么节目，以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。

　　时态：这篇习作可采用三种时态来写。由于本单元主要出现的时态是一般将来时和现在进行时，所以这里我们才用一般现在时，现在进行时和一般将来时来写。

　　句型：一般现在时：主语+动词原形+其他。

　　现在进行时：主语+现在分词+其他。

　　一般将来时：主语+ be going to / will +动词原形+其他。

　　注意：由于本篇文章中所涉及的时态比较多，所以要注意一下时态的变化。学生们都在表演什么节目可以用现在进行时，将要去做什么，要用将来时。另外还要注意，一般现在时在肯定句中，主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词也要用第三人称单数。