PEP小学英语六年级下册作文范例及点评3

概要：Zoom’s WeekendZoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning， he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning， he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了Zoom的周末活动。时态：这篇文章可以用三种时态来写，由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态，所以我们采用一般过去时态比较合适。句型：主语+动词过去式+过去时间。注意：活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法，但要注意动词过去式的拼写。

Zoom’s Weekend

　　Zoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning， he washed his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning， he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watch TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.

　　【要领点评】

　　写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了Zoom的周末活动。

　　时态：这篇文章可以用三种时态来写，由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态，所以我们采用一般过去时态比较合适。

　　句型：主语+动词过去式+过去时间。

　　注意：活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法，但要注意动词过去式的拼写。