PEP小学英语六年级上册作文范例及点评2

概要：Don’t be against the traffic rulesI go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow，I know I can’t cross the road ，so I wait.If the light turns green， I know it means “Go”， and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的

Don’t be against the traffic rules

　　I go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 in the morning .I must cross two busy roads .If the traffic light is red or yellow，I know I can’t cross the road ，so I wait.

　　If the light turns green， I know it means “Go”， and then I walk across the road .I always ride on the right side of the road .I am never against the traffic rules.

　　【要领点评】

　　这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规则”，小作者没有说一些空话，而是从自己的经历写起，叙述自己以什么方式去上学，在上学的路上是怎么做的，很形象。

　　小朋友们在作文时注意不要图大，那样很容易使文章显得空洞，而要写自己身边熟悉的事情。要注意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等。