PEP小学英语六年级下册作文范例及点评4

概要：Tom’s HolidayTom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word， they enjoy their holiday.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动，记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。时态：这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。由于本单元主要讲述的是一般过去时的用法，所以这里大部分我们采用一般过去时比较合适。句型：主语+动词过去式+其他……主语+will+动词原形+其他……

Tom’s Holiday

　　Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word， they enjoy their holiday.

　　【要领点评】

　　写法：这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动，记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。

　　时态：这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。由于本单元主要讲述的是一般过去时的用法，所以这里大部分我们采用一般过去时比较合适。

　　句型：主语+动词过去式+其他……

　　主语+will+动词原形+其他……

　　注意：活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写，但要注意动词过去式的变化规则。例：eat 的过去式为ate，为不规则变化。